Reviews for Aliena & David
Whatever-I-Say chapter 21 . 10/10/2004
The perfect ending to this great story. I love it!
Jynx Rose chapter 21 . 8/28/2004
That was such a sweet story.
I so totally want something like that to happen to me now.
That was awsome.
I loved it.
Garbage chapter 21 . 7/13/2004
Hi! I have just one word to say after reading this: Wow!
I thought that this story was awesome. You put a lot of feeling into this story. I was so impressed. Thanks!
char2006 chapter 13 . 6/24/2004
wonderful wonderful wondeful. i love it so far. you are really good, just a when you have david talking to someone else, for example"We can't. It's still school hours." "Do you always follow the rules?" it looks like it is david saying all that, you need to break it into two sentence type thingies..but other then that its it up
Tina465 chapter 21 . 5/25/2004
Great story, no...wonderful story. I'm glad that Aliena and David are together they sound like a really cute couple. I like your wrting style, too..Keep writing.
Wildwatermelon chapter 21 . 4/13/2004
Oh, what a cute little story. I really liked it. Keep writing.
reviewer chapter 21 . 4/8/2004
i love your story. Keep up the good work :)
crystal-chan chapter 10 . 4/8/2004
*takes breath*
Meh chapter 21 . 4/6/2004
O_O I love you!
shadowdreamer7598 chapter 21 . 3/24/2004
A fitting grand finale! GREAT STORY, keep writing! :D
shadowdreamer7598 chapter 17 . 3/24/2004
I loved that chapter! Finally, they admit they like each other!
shadowdreamer7598 chapter 15 . 3/24/2004
oh I really liked that chapter! I cant wait to see what happens
shadowdreamer7598 chapter 13 . 3/24/2004
I love that chapter, I love the characters, all the threads, bla bla, I LOVE IT!
shadowdreamer7598 chapter 10 . 3/24/2004
Great story! I love it!
shadowdreamer7598 chapter 8 . 3/24/2004
Just a mistake you made, before I compliment your story:
You changed David's eye color from chapter one to chapter seven.
1: She frowned and looked up at him, seeing concern dancing within his deep blue orb
7: Walking down the stairs slowly, he rubbed the last trace of sleep from his light brown eyes.
Just thought you might want to know that. I LOVE YOUR STORY! I am also starting to like David more.
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