| Reviews for Aliena & David |
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   shadowdreamer7598 chapter 7 . 3/24/2004 huh? It doesn't seem like Aliena would say that about her friend and his date. And a quick correction: *in science class, the teacher was calling Aliena MR. Walker.* The story is so good so far! |
| shadowdreamer7598 chapter 6 . 3/24/2004 aww...kevin's so nice. :) |
| shadowdreamer7598 chapter 5 . 3/24/2004 Hmm...another character enters the story. It's really good so far! |
| shadowdreamer7598 chapter 3 . 3/24/2004 I really like your story so far! Aliena has quite a spirit, and it's funny laughing at how stupid David can be. Can't wait to read more! |
| Ruairidh chapter 21 . 2/15/2004 I actually had time to finish it today, and let me just tell you that I loved it! Crystal's plan was so perfect and halarious. She's a pretty cool kid :) I thought the ending was great. It definetly left me smiling. The characters were wonderfully developed and they all had a specific purpose in the story. I see that you have a sequel up now. I'll have to read that next. Wonderful job overall! It's going on my favorite story list :) |
| Ruairidh chapter 17 . 2/15/2004 oh. . . sweet :) |
| Ruairidh chapter 16 . 2/15/2004 Gosh, Mary's a bitch! I'm glad Kevin broke up with her. Poor David though. . . I feel bad for the guy. Must read on :) |
| Ruairidh chapter 11 . 2/14/2004 oh my gosh, I'm addicted to this! Seriously, I'm sitting here reading when I have a million things to do today. I guess I better stop here though, considering that I'm already late for something :) You are really a fantastic writer though. . . |
| Ruairidh chapter 5 . 2/10/2004 Hm, David seems a little stuck on himself. I don't really blame Aliena :) But both the characters are very well-written. They seem just like real people. I'm surprised that you're only fourteen, because this is really good. I'll have to read more when I have time. Thanks for the review by the way, chapter eight is up :) |
| Ruairidh chapter 3 . 1/31/2004 Aliena's last line was perfect :) This story looks great so far and wow! you have so many reviews! I'll definetly continue with this. Thanks for the review by the way, I really appreciate it :) |
| BoyCrazyDarkMagician chapter 21 . 1/21/2004 OH! WHAT A CUTE STORY! I LOVED IT! |
| punkrockprincess900 chapter 21 . 1/8/2004 *sniff sniff* aww that was beautiful! I loved it and Kevin's not so bad after all omg i cant tell u how much i love this fic...its going on my favs heck UR going on my faves! thanks for writing such an awesome story! |
| punkrockprincess900 chapter 18 . 1/8/2004 damn that bitch! damn Mary too lmao. anyway i hope it doesnt work! guess i should find out |
| punkrockprincess900 chapter 17 . 1/8/2004 HELL YEAH! finally they kissed! okay this is my new favorite chapter! im lovin this fic! |
| punkrockprincess900 chapter 15 . 1/8/2004 okay i love this chapter...its the best! I think it was so cute! Anyway im off to read more |