Reviews for Aliena & David
shadowdreamer7598 chapter 7 . 3/24/2004
huh? It doesn't seem like Aliena would say that about her friend and his date. And a quick correction: *in science class, the teacher was calling Aliena MR. Walker.* The story is so good so far!
shadowdreamer7598 chapter 6 . 3/24/2004
aww...kevin's so nice. :)
shadowdreamer7598 chapter 5 . 3/24/2004
Hmm...another character enters the story. It's really good so far!
shadowdreamer7598 chapter 3 . 3/24/2004
I really like your story so far! Aliena has quite a spirit, and it's funny laughing at how stupid David can be. Can't wait to read more!
Ruairidh chapter 21 . 2/15/2004
I actually had time to finish it today, and let me just tell you that I loved it! Crystal's plan was so perfect and halarious. She's a pretty cool kid :) I thought the ending was great. It definetly left me smiling. The characters were wonderfully developed and they all had a specific purpose in the story. I see that you have a sequel up now. I'll have to read that next. Wonderful job overall! It's going on my favorite story list :)
Ruairidh chapter 17 . 2/15/2004
oh. . . sweet :)
Ruairidh chapter 16 . 2/15/2004
Gosh, Mary's a bitch! I'm glad Kevin broke up with her. Poor David though. . . I feel bad for the guy. Must read on :)
Ruairidh chapter 11 . 2/14/2004
oh my gosh, I'm addicted to this! Seriously, I'm sitting here reading when I have a million things to do today. I guess I better stop here though, considering that I'm already late for something :) You are really a fantastic writer though. . .
Ruairidh chapter 5 . 2/10/2004
Hm, David seems a little stuck on himself. I don't really blame Aliena :) But both the characters are very well-written. They seem just like real people. I'm surprised that you're only fourteen, because this is really good. I'll have to read more when I have time. Thanks for the review by the way, chapter eight is up :)
Ruairidh chapter 3 . 1/31/2004
Aliena's last line was perfect :) This story looks great so far and wow! you have so many reviews! I'll definetly continue with this. Thanks for the review by the way, I really appreciate it :)
BoyCrazyDarkMagician chapter 21 . 1/21/2004
punkrockprincess900 chapter 21 . 1/8/2004
*sniff sniff* aww that was beautiful! I loved it and Kevin's not so bad after all omg i cant tell u how much i love this fic...its going on my favs heck UR going on my faves! thanks for writing such an awesome story!
punkrockprincess900 chapter 18 . 1/8/2004
damn that bitch! damn Mary too lmao. anyway i hope it doesnt work! guess i should find out
punkrockprincess900 chapter 17 . 1/8/2004
HELL YEAH! finally they kissed! okay this is my new favorite chapter! im lovin this fic!
punkrockprincess900 chapter 15 . 1/8/2004
okay i love this chapter...its the best! I think it was so cute! Anyway im off to read more
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