|Reviews for Aliena & David|
| punkrockprincess900 chapter 10 . 1/8/2004
Hey i just started really reading this fic today, im sry i havent been leaving reivews but ive been rushin aloing cause im really into it but i just had to leave a review here
I loved that Harrison Ford comment! omg that was funny! Anyway i love this fic, it totally kicks ass! I cant wait to read more, so i wont!
| caligrl478 chapter 21 . 12/19/2003
this story is awsome. I'm a total sucker for romances with sappy, happy, endings. I really do hope you write a sequl.
| chocolatecreme06 chapter 21 . 12/9/2003
OMG i love this story. I spent every minute i was online reading it and its just like a fairy tale. I really like how they got together and how sweet he is to her and how she changes him and he isn't really as bad as seh thinks he is. (still a virgin and all that) And i must say Crystal is the coolest. i love the grande finale! i can't wait to start in the sequal. KUDOS!
| Lady Orient chapter 21 . 12/9/2003
hey there. I like it, I haven't gotten a chance to read all of it so I'm printing it off to take with me but I'll get back to you.
| lil-popcorngurl chapter 15 . 12/3/2003
this story is pretty good so far although you need a little more description of what is going on, I like it i think you are doing an excellent job cya l8erz
| Heather chapter 21 . 11/17/2003
*applauds* that was brillaint! Absolutely stunning!
| Heather M chapter 9 . 11/16/2003
I love this so much!
| Heather Malfoy chapter 6 . 11/16/2003
This fic rox!
| Britani. G. Simone chapter 14 . 11/3/2003
O, cool story! Loving it!
| Samie chapter 21 . 11/2/2003
omg i love ur story. At first i thought it was gunna end up with them breaking up..but it was a happy ending! I'm such a hopeless romantic. lol. I love ur story its so good. Just keep it up with the happy endings! lol.
| Reviewer chapter 21 . 10/26/2003
This was a short little cute story... maybe next time you should go for angst...
| Miss Missy chapter 21 . 10/15/2003
This was a terrific story. I love the whole "bad boy" & "good girl" story line. Your characters were well developed and believable.
| little owl chapter 21 . 10/15/2003
AWW! SEQUEL! CRYSTALRONALD! AW! OKAY, I'm cool now but wow that was awesome! D
| Marlah Singer chapter 21 . 10/13/2003
*Claps* Good story. Um, I really can't think of anything else to say. Write another story and to your kid of question, I think that you shouldn't write a second story for this, coz they sumtimes tend to make the first story seem bad. No offence. And if anything else happens we might be led to believe that Aliena and David do not live happily ever after, and no one wants that do they? If you have the time could you review some of my stuff plz? Keep writting!
| Tristanlover59 chapter 21 . 10/10/2003
i loved this story! you have talent! i hope you continue writing awesome stories!