Reviews for Aliena & David |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is a great story ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey this was really good, I hope to read more of your stuff! Whit |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! Gald 2 find that Mary got properly caned! I liked it! :- |
![]() ![]() ![]() that woz so sweet do a sequal |
![]() ![]() I'M SO SAD IT'S OVER, BUT I'M SO GLAD I GOT TOREAD IT. HOPE YOU DO WRITE A SEQUEL. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK. |
![]() ![]() ![]() sequal possibly? it was really good |
![]() ![]() aw that was so sweet i liked crystal she was one cool sis. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I luved the story! It was cute, suspenseful, funny and dramitic. That might even happen in real life. Keep up the awesome writting. : D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I do not write anything, but I have read your story. I love it. I was addicted to it. I like stories that have to ups and downs, but that end on a good note. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I finnaly got around to reading this last chapter. I really hope its not the last I hear of aliena or david, or crystal. Anyway great story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it, I loved it, I loved it!11 It was a great story... You're a great author! write more Lots of love Clavel |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the ending is just fluffy like I love chapters to be |
![]() ![]() ![]() The last part was so funny! More coming from a teacher!1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this chapter, really! It was so cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your story, it's cute and nice and fun, I'm going to read the next chapter right now Read Ya |