Reviews for Aliena & David
crazyperson27 chapter 21 . 10/8/2003
This is a great story !
QuAcKqUaCk282 chapter 21 . 9/28/2003
Hey this was really good, I hope to read more of your stuff!

Whit
Semy chapter 21 . 9/20/2003
yay! Gald 2 find that Mary got properly caned! I liked it! :-
Shez chapter 21 . 9/18/2003
that woz so sweet

do a sequal
AMC chapter 1 . 9/17/2003
I'M SO SAD IT'S OVER, BUT I'M SO GLAD I GOT TOREAD IT. HOPE YOU DO WRITE A SEQUEL. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
uknowwhoslittleprincess chapter 21 . 9/15/2003
sequal possibly? it was really good
galene chapter 21 . 9/14/2003
aw that was so sweet

i liked crystal she was one cool sis.
sillypenguin187 chapter 21 . 9/8/2003
I luved the story! It was cute, suspenseful, funny and dramitic. That might even happen in real life. Keep up the awesome writting. : D
itsamudthang chapter 21 . 8/30/2003
I do not write anything, but I have read your story. I love it. I was addicted to it. I like stories that have to ups and downs, but that end on a good note.
Ares1020 chapter 21 . 8/27/2003
I finnaly got around to reading this last chapter. I really hope its not the last I hear of aliena or david, or crystal. Anyway great story.
Clavel chapter 21 . 8/26/2003
I loved it, I loved it, I loved it!11

It was a great story... You're a great author! write more

Lots of love

Clavel
Clavel chapter 17 . 8/25/2003
I loved the ending is just fluffy like I love chapters to be
Clavel chapter 12 . 8/25/2003
The last part was so funny! More coming from a teacher!1
Clavel chapter 13 . 8/25/2003
I loved this chapter, really! It was so cute
Clavel chapter 9 . 8/25/2003
I like your story, it's cute and nice and fun, I'm going to read the next chapter right now

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