Wonderful poem - and even more so, it's in haiku form! *gasp* (Haha, definitely not a bad thing if that's what you're thinking). Actually, I've never read a haiku with more than one stanza..so it was a bit unusual for me while I read this at first. I never knew haiku's could be several verses (nyah, shows how much I know, huh? XD) Well, anyways keep on writing and take care! :) -Mitsuke, mylittlefirefly

I really liked this. It was pretty awesome. I used to write poetry and it poems like this that make me wish I could get back into the scheme of things.

wow. this one really hits home for me. it's beautifully written. you have a great gift, dont ever stop writing.

who were you thinking about when you wrote this E.D. it sounds really cool

i wanted to thank you for giving me such a nice review but i think you have more emotion and compassion than i. i'm very impressed with your work.

Brilliant! Wonderful message!

~ CoolBeans18s

::Applause::

Great. I like the message here.

~Heart of the Sword

That was good. I think basicaly everyone can connect to it.