way to shed things in a different light. a very well written peace. (no spelling error was made)

Nice job. Out of Hell, eh? That gives me an idea! Thanks!

that was absolutely beautiful, i really love your poems. Keep Writing

very sweet. Nice allusion to the Bible with "Shoel"

It's GrEAT!

Post more, post more! Very angst-romance, although lite in both genres. Great step towards lighter poetry!