I really like this poem. I feel like that a lot. You're a good writer.

Nice. More like a poem than a song (no offence intended) but its got a good feeling in this small piece, and thats one of the things that makes any song great ;)

Wow that was great you seemed to be very mad at the world but that made it better you should write more

I don't know why but it just seems really good for it 2 be written in science class! _ It's good..great I luv it!