That's just horrible and I know what you mean by the steam thing. It feels so nice sometimes to just say it out loud of how you felt. I felt peaceful when I told my friend how I felt about being bullied by these group of girls back then. I can't believe guys can be so violent and then thats why my friend told me how her friend was dating a very cute guy but he ended up beating her whenever she did something he didn't like. And that even includes tying up her hair because he thought she looked bad with her hair in a ponytail.

Miss Blade...

i just wanted to sop by and tell you how inspiring and beautiful this piece of writing was. I can't tell you how many times i've asked myself some of these questions about friends and family and of course during relationships. This piece really hit home for me and words just can't describe how i feel when i read this. Thanks for sharing such an inspiring piece!

xoxo-hannah-xoxo

Hey SamiYep its me IshahI was just checking out some of your oh my god this is so touching. I know i'm so very late but i hope you're okay and have fully recovered. No-one deserves to be trested like that especially some-one as nice as piece is really touching and heart-breaking.

i'm glad your out and can continue writing and living life. writing this for any others is, oh there's not a wrod for it. it's fantastic that you're encouraging others like this.

is this the boyfriend you broke up with? the relationship Vampire Lover was based on? This letter was filled with so much emotion.

Hey. This is really depressing and prolly the number one reason why I believe that all guys truly suck. I mean, I'm still young and everything, prolly too young to have to know what you're talking about, but I do. This poem is really touching. It kinda makes me realize how screwed up relationships can be and why anyone should avoid this kinda of relationship. Really touching.

I don't know what's more sad... That fact that someone could make you think those thoughts, or the idea that I know exactly how you feel... *huggles* But, based on the writing alone darling, it's beautiful... Keep up the amazing writing...
Jenners

that was really sad. i hope you got help! you really should tell someone if you haven't already. i must say, that this "poem" is worth a million reviews. O.o-

That's an awesome thing you've got there. I can relate to that, as I'm sure many girls could, which is awesome when you can reach your readers like that. You're gonna be an amazing author someday! I can't stop reading your stories.

v. v. good! I know the feelings quite well. Great work!

~Devious

wow, heart-felt, sincere, hope you got your point across. it would take a pretty thick-headed person to not be moved by this. great emotion, wonderful writing :)

your a good writer. :)

I can't really put into words how this makes me feel, but I'm going to try. It makes me feel like I'm not the only one who puts themselves out there. Though I don't know your name,where you live, or anything fact related about you; somehow I feel like I do know you. And that's because you put yourself out there for others to see. I just hope that someday I'll be able to put myself out there for others to see, like you do.

PS-I think you make a great writer.

the way you used a letter and made it into a poem is awesome. great job!

Likes.