Reviews for Slow Jive
romancingthemoon chapter 1 . 2/28/2004
This is a delicious poem. Love can be so good sometimes.
Vilyamorna chapter 1 . 6/8/2003
Simple but very elegant- every word is placed to perfection. I love the comparison to music.
blinkie chapter 1 . 6/8/2003
very sensual and very hypnotic. i like the part where you used colors. great job!