Sigh I wish this would be updated but I don't think it will be :( too bad. I should've checked when it was last updated before getting invested kfjgfgjvkhbfsheulyifidgifyig. Well thanks for these 11 chapters.

WAH~! I LOVE THIS STORY~!

I own the book "Lost Souls" and so I was even more curious about this story because the end of it left me unsatisfied, you know? Personally, I think her other book, "Drawing Blood" was WAY more awesome.

But~ I REALLY LIKE this story! You SO need to keep on working on it! _

I'm DYING to know what happens after that train ride. *nosebleed*

~Shizu _

I thought it was awesome.

I wanna know what happens with that whole "Egypt" thing. Can't wait for the next one.

I read this about four times through when I found it, and I was sad to see that its been almost three years since you last updated it. Maybe you lost interest or just don't have time, but I'm wondering if you have any intention at all of finishing it. I'd love to read more.

Awesome! very well written! This is the first m/m fiction i've read and I loved it! The characters are deep and intricate. keep it up!

This is so great! I love this story so much and can't wait for an update, it's easily my fav. vampire story out there. Nothing makes me swoon... Zillah really just should give in. It'd be much more enjoyable then just avoiding and trying to ignore, I'm sure of that XD

Hmm, interesting story. However I find it hard to get past the names barrier. Lost Souls is one of my favourite books and names Noth and Zill are unique to it. I know I sound like a bitch, but could you concider changing the names of your characters. Sorry, buy.

...I want more! Please... story good, want more. I luv Nothing but I'm not too sure y. I just luv him and I luv how u developed these characters. Please update. PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!

I love this story. I just finished reading what you put up. I really like. _

I loved it, can't wait to see what happens next.

When are you going to update this? Soon I hope, it seems to have been a long time since you last did. I love this story. Update soon please.

Please update! I'm dying to see what happens!

I can't say I was exactly waiting for updates, but I'm glade you did put more up. I love this story and you MUST write more!

nice but hurry I wan tot know what the nexts step