Reviews for Other than What You Make It
Earthsong12 chapter 1 . 11/27/2004
I really really like this story. I love the idea. It's definetly going on my favorites. Poor Benjamin. :( I don't get something. If in order to fix his problem he had to make someone else "unreal", then she would have to go make someone else "unreal" and it would keep being passed around. Why couldn't Benjamin just stay how he was?Anyway, very cool story, awesome job!
Diana Shore chapter 1 . 2/5/2004
Really cool! Although, I'm a bit confused as to why Claire would knowingly send Benjamin to alter someone else's fate just to re-align his own...
Nicole Lauren chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
Simply marvelous. It has been a long time since I read a story with such a vivid plot. I thought you did justice with the ending too. Poor Professor Coleman, I bet she'll have an even HARDER time managing the class now. :P

It'd be interesting to see how things work out with Allison and Jared too. I think you did a wonderful job playing with whole concept of fate. Kinda brings up the idea that you can only escape fate for so long before it catches up to you.

Peace out,

Nikki
Shelti M chapter 1 . 3/12/2003
Wow. Cool. A little odd, but very cool. Interesting views on what fate is.
Dawn I. Cambridge chapter 1 . 11/8/2002
I love it. I really do!
Posi chapter 1 . 11/3/2002
O.O wow. This is a really good story. When I was about eight or nine, I used to read like a rock-I couldn't hear or see anything that was going on around me-but I haven't done that for a really long time (too busy with school... ugh.) until I read this story... It's really good! I like the suspense and, well, the ending is sad and stuff but it's ok... the theory it's based on is a little screwed, I mean, his personality made him do what his mother told him, but still, I like it!
Sparkles-Chan chapter 1 . 6/12/2002
:*( That's so sad! Very good, but so sad!
ReaDiNGS DaRK RoSe chapter 1 . 3/3/2002
do you belive in fate? im just wondering. This is an amazing story! really great!

Jamixxxx
Snowlily chapter 1 . 2/16/2002
WHOA! That was... WONDERFUL! It was a bit confusing at first, but I loved how it ended. It was truly amazing, and I'd have to say that I've never seen anything like it. Thank you so much for reviewing so many of my poems and fics! I'm going to read your other Harry Potter fic now! Lils
Katterree Fengari chapter 1 . 2/7/2002
THIs is good too! Ok, bout Benjamin, I'm in the middle of ur fic, and this is me, proving I knew it before u wrote it!...or something like that,...by CLaire's second talk to Allison warning bout Benjamin, he's going to die soon, or he's like a ghost..cus, ppl don't see him always...hmm..not really clear...

Wait! So now Professor Colemen has the doomed life! so...one set right, another set wrong! ooooo...hmm...U WRIte good! Keep it up!
box chapter 1 . 1/26/2002
that was wonderful... it's so... wow...
Raonaid Luckwell chapter 1 . 1/25/2002
Wow..this is really disturbing.. but I like it. Thank you for enjoying my song fics. Never put much thoughts into getting anything published
Xilmin Nerrar chapter 1 . 12/9/2001
... I'm speechless! All I can say is 'wow!' I've never read anything like it, but I really really *really* liked that a lot! Very dramatic and freaky! The ending was just marvelous, and a perfect way to finish it off... wow...
The Angry Generalization chapter 1 . 11/25/2001
Oish. Creepy. If you haven't already, you should read "Mort" by Terry Pratchett. Gibrit Millnium Hand and Shrimp and whatnot.
Zab1 chapter 1 . 4/8/2001
Wow... that was twilight zone-ish... *Very* marvelous plot idea, beautifully carried out, I must say. Reminded me of the kind of thing I might find in one of my favorite books of ghost stories. If you keep at this, I'm sure one day I'll have to go to the bookstore to get your stories )