hmm...well I really like this poem for it is so true. U fear em while you are happy cause then they are after you, but when you are down they wont just come put you out of ur damn misery. Very well written. K/W. And by the way I know how you feel with not letting the emotions go. Just keep writing and it will all just come as a natural flow.

~Mutt~

The monsters really do like to see us suffer, don't they? You sit there, and you say "come" but they ignore you. It's not until you say "go" that they hear. And they come.

Eh, ok. Great poem! A few typos, but the poem was good!