|Reviews for Mercenary Turismo|
| Shuyan chapter 2 . 3/4/2005
I read both of the chapters and i must say these are very good. Very discriptive with dialougue and details. Good job! If you have a chance can you check out my tory Shade Of Darkness: The Battle
| penster chapter 2 . 7/15/2003
This one's different, but I like it. You should keep up with this one. Thanks for the review. I'll try to write something happier. LOL. It's not like I'm a depressed person or anything, I just write when I'm angry. This one's a keeper!
| Master Chief chapter 2 . 7/1/2003
no gun battle? no worries... an in depth look at the past is always a good way to go. this jones guy seems like a prick though and i wouldn't be surprised to see them fight to the death in the end... waiting impatiently for the next installment
P.S. Rims should be going on the 240 next week.
| fatchuck31088 chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
Good story, liked it alot. (By the way I did put up a sequel to The Eye of the Bullet, it's posted now) Update soon
| Master Chief chapter 1 . 6/10/2003
p99s? aren't they those futuristic looking guns with the trigger near the front. twin p99s? wicked... I like it... definately has the whole espionage thing down. More of the Vanquish please? (That's a sick car.) Looking forward to the next chapter...(and a bad ass shootout?) Keep it up
P.S. could u take a look at one of my stories? thanks
| bex321 chapter 1 . 6/10/2003
ooh, nice cliffhanger, good way to end it. this seems pretty cool, very x, if you've seen it. at least he's not a james bond pimp, that's all i can say. but keep going, i'm wondering who's three safeties these are...
(and welcome to fictionpress)