Reviews for Roman Enlightenment |
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![]() ![]() love it i hope you have more late timey style stories great writing |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a mess. So much to be learned and explained about modern technology considering he is ancient ( d$#% near at least). |
![]() ![]() Oh god. How old IS Mozelle anyway? Just curious. I guess this story is abandoned since you haven't updated in eight years. But in the event it does happen I'd like to know. P.s Great story! I finished the first part as well as this in under five hours. You really should continue it. |
![]() ![]() I love this story and its predecessor! You are such a talented writer, and this story you've crafted is so unique and original. Thanks for sharing your work and I hope that you will continue with it someday. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahaha I came back for a re-read, both the first book and this one. Enjoying it just as much the second time around. :) Interesting tidbit, I have actually been in a McDonalds in Paris, France, with wine on the menu - one red, one white. I believe they also had a couple of beer choices, but I'm not entirely sure. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I found this story while browsing through the site. Then I went back to read the first story. I'm not a fan of M-rated stories, though yours was well-written and conceptualized. Now I've re-read the first ten chapters of this and it reminded me why I got hooked in the first place. Time travel stories can be cheesy, but yours avoids that well. The only issue that throws me off is how well he seems to understand English. That part might be a bit far-fetched. Still, I really hope that you'll pick this story up again and finish it. Thanks. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How old is Mozelle? I thought she'd be in her twenties like Lupus but she seems to be older than 35. Nothing's wrong with that but it feels weird to read. Ew, cougar. |
![]() ![]() Im loving this. :D Guilt trip time! |
![]() ![]() OMG! I love yur sequel! Glad you made one! Lookig forward to your updates! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh dear, I seem to have run into the issue I feared with the first book, here. Any chance you are coming back to finish this? You would win my undying affections! Very much enjoyed, and I do wish I could read the rest of their tale. I Love Lupus' culture shock and the way their relationship is finally balancing. |
![]() ![]() Keep going please it's really good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! When will you update the story of Lupus and Mozell? |
![]() ![]() ![]() come back! please please please finish this story! I'm so in love with Lupus :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm liking this :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love it! And poor guy, he's stuck and isn't going to see hus little brothers anymore. Well. His mom was a witch and that Celsus dude was a phycho! Anyways, I hope you write another chapter soon! XOXO |