Reviews for Footprints
TheLastKiss chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
Very beautiful. I like the reference to leaving footprints in the sands of the heart. Kind of like leaving an impression and memories to be remembered forever.

Thanks for the review!

Best Wishes,Brittney
TheBrokenWanderer chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
i know the feeling...anyway...very good...and thanx for reviewing my stuff...and putting it on your fav's...maybe once i get through some more of your stuff, you'll be on mine...anyway...ttyl...
Dezires chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
Very nice..reminds me almost of a greeting card I once saw o.o
Darkstar chapter 1 . 11/26/2004
You couldnt have expressed it better
Kat-Renee Kittel chapter 1 . 9/12/2004
This may sound strange, but the more I read your poems, the more I can see into the heart of the characters in my novel. Your descriptions have such depth from the soul. ..
Nayoming Grae chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
this was pretty good. i'm no poetry expert or anything, but i relly liked it. i love the comparisons between the relationship and the ocean/shore. fantastic!
larna chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
This is really beautiful you can really read the emotions.
waterbaby chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
i agree with your friends. gold all the way.
Ruana chapter 1 . 9/1/2003
thats cool i like it.

try adding punctuation, it might make it easier to read and flow and stuff.
Transparent Cherub chapter 1 . 8/24/2003
this is wonderful..i love it.

Steph chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
Wow that was beautiful... really sweet :)
Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
That was excellent! Great descriptions too!
Lala Starr chapter 1 . 6/11/2003
Jen, this is so good! I really like your writing! Keep up the good work!