|Reviews for Footprints|
| TheLastKiss chapter 1 . 2/20/2005
Very beautiful. I like the reference to leaving footprints in the sands of the heart. Kind of like leaving an impression and memories to be remembered forever.
Thanks for the review!
| TheBrokenWanderer chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
i know the feeling...anyway...very good...and thanx for reviewing my stuff...and putting it on your fav's...maybe once i get through some more of your stuff, you'll be on mine...anyway...ttyl...
| Dezires chapter 1 . 1/14/2005
Very nice..reminds me almost of a greeting card I once saw o.o
| Darkstar chapter 1 . 11/26/2004
You couldnt have expressed it better
| Kat-Renee Kittel chapter 1 . 9/12/2004
This may sound strange, but the more I read your poems, the more I can see into the heart of the characters in my novel. Your descriptions have such depth from the soul. ..
| Nayoming Grae chapter 1 . 5/28/2004
this was pretty good. i'm no poetry expert or anything, but i relly liked it. i love the comparisons between the relationship and the ocean/shore. fantastic!
| larna chapter 1 . 3/29/2004
This is really beautiful you can really read the emotions.
| waterbaby chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
i agree with your friends. gold all the way.
| Ruana chapter 1 . 9/1/2003
thats cool i like it.
try adding punctuation, it might make it easier to read and flow and stuff.
| Transparent Cherub chapter 1 . 8/24/2003
this is wonderful..i love it.
| Steph chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
Wow that was beautiful... really sweet :)
| Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
That was excellent! Great descriptions too!
| Lala Starr chapter 1 . 6/11/2003
Jen, this is so good! I really like your writing! Keep up the good work!