Reviews for Too Many Tomorrows
alsdjf chapter 1 . 6/25/2003
Sao: I can't say I understand where this is coming from. I've only known two people who've died. A girl from cancer, and I cried mostly because I never got a chance to really become friends with her and she'd been so nice, and the grandfather of a family friend.

HOS: And as for family, we're not close with any of them, so if they died, yes...

Sao: I'd be sad, but I don't know if I'd be so sad as to feel like you obviously did when your grandmother died. *shrugs* I know it sounds cold, but it's the truth.

~Sao & HOS
blessed-goddess chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
Gosh, this piece is beautiful, I love the rhyming here. Not too forced...I had a sorta sad feeling in the end

Love It
SerAnonima chapter 1 . 6/10/2003
This poem expresses great pain...I feel your pain throught your words...really really NICE. Sorry about your Grandma...