That's good! I love your work!

sounds kinda like me. i think the repeating lines give the poem a good effect. keep on writing. i don't have long before summer, so i have to tell my crush that i like her, or she could slip through my fingers. I can really relate to your poem, by the way.

well this person's probably got the message by now, as for the poem, really nicely written, some people don't like lines being repeated over and over again, i think it makes every line stick out that way.

i live this poem..its nice although i wouldnt keep on repeating the phrase i get nervous if i were its a nice peom and shows true effections..i hope that persons gets the message:)

and i hope too taht u read and review some of my poems caz i wanna know what u think