Reviews for Immobile
Inicana chapter 1 . 12/26/2003
I like this... It has the same sort of feel through it the entire way. Flows, and fits... Hinting, but evading. Good!
Inicana
anon63 chapter 1 . 7/22/2003
On the surface, it's so simple... but what a deceptive impression...
Jenja223 chapter 1 . 7/5/2003
I really liked that piece...simple, yet not...

~Jenn
OuttaSight chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
well hello there Anita! Great poem! nicely done, wish i could write like you! well keep it going!
not sure yet chapter 1 . 6/16/2003
interesting, very bumpy, which can be a good thing cause it adds a bit to the flow...um, by bumpy i mean that its starts short then gets longer, then short, then longer and then ends short...does that make sense? anywayz, awesome poem though, pretty, nicely done