Some gang goddess she is.

Hey, I really like this story, and I hope you keep writing. It actually begins alot like my one story so if/when you read mine...please don't think I was copying off you.
~Ferrons Vampire Siren~

i liked this story it has fluff and lots of love dovy kuso buy i wouldn't want it anyother way i am a fallin devil for romance, happily ever after with a side twist that is!

you stories are WOW!WE

WRITE MORE SOON!

wow, i like richard! her fall could have sued a tad bit more detail. just to emphasize the severity of her injury, but other than that, nice chapter! im beginning to dislike clavin more and more...but im wondering if maybe richard is employed by richard...? just a paranoid suspicious, lol! i mean, what if its a way for calvin to drive her away to someone who would report back to him, which would better enable him to win his side of the bet? hehe, yes, i have a devious mind...anyways, like i said, great job! it is a bit short, but do not be discouraged! youre doing great, keep it up and post soon!

o *delighted squeal* i love chivalrous gentlemen! well, im a bit suspicious too...is he really nice? hm...good description, the story's developing well! i mean, im really eager t osee how her relationship with calvin changes, too, and esp the duke's role in the story...must read more! great job, keep it up and post soon!

I like Richard he's nice. Good chapter, VERY short. Maybe you should make them longer.

It's a great story so far, please update soon!

interesting stories

its a little short for my taste, but then again, we all have experience wit hwriters block, eh? i really enjoyed your description though. it sounds like you made a more conscious effort to really detail the surroundings and proprs. although a couple parts were somewhat awkward, i really enjoyed it! the duke really piques my interest, so PLEASE update soon! i'd really like to see what happens with eve and calvin...and i wonder how he'll act after their "intimate" talk :P please post soon!

Good chapter. Is Richard around Eve's age or not? Anyway thank u for updating again! UPDATE AGAIN ASAP!

Please Please Please keep Endless Evening! I luv this story so much! UPDATE ASAP!

very nice chapter. the beginning developed wonderfully, although i was a little surprised at how quickly they each accepted the "truce" considering how they've acted in the past few chapters. calvin's openness can be interpreted two ways, also. on the negative side, his lack of hesitancy to tell her something he hadn't told anyone else is inconsistent with the rest of his nature. on the other hand, this could be your way of showing another side of him, in which case this is a great example of his investment of trust in her. meaning, that this scene could be the foundation of their future "relationship." a little more description or conveyance of emotion would've enhanced calvin's story, and there were some run-ons and punctuation errors. other than that, this was a great chapter. the story is progessing nicely and the plot is developing well, although their deal confuses me somewhat. but oh well, i can go back and reread the chapter in which they agreed to the deal *shrug* so, great job! looking forward to more ;)

I love it! Please keep writing and updtaing it!