Reviews for your idiosyncrasies |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I could really rap to this *grins devilishily* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice. You have a wonderful vocabulary, and use it well in your work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i esp loved the ending tho the rest was good too "didn't know if it was love or hate... but it surrendered" i think thats realy tru 2 a lot of things which makes it relateable which makes it good so good job... -eville kittie |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really loved this one, it was really well written! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You have a gift for putting into words the emotions so many of us feel, that it's almost uncanny. I had a relationship similar to this once, except that it was I who walked on, and my dear friend who was left behind... I wish a thousand times over that such a move was not necessary, but too often in the course of life we must make difficult choices. Great job on your poem. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow . . . How sad . . . I really liked it, but . . . Wow . . . One thing, you might want to edit this just a bit. Y'know, capitalize the i's to I. Other than that, you've done a great job. This is probably the first poem that's made me want to cry. Tenika Dargan |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Very moving. It's sad when things don't work out. I know. It's happened to me. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another amazing poem from you! I love your rhyming! It all rhymes but it's not too much. Perfect! I like the emotion expressed in this poem, especially the very last line. |
![]() ![]() ![]() You've got the whole urban-romance thing going...very nice. I like your stuff. It's real and not fluff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() whoo! i like this one. it's really good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was really good. I liked it, kinda reminds me of one of mates. Keep writing. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the idea but it struggles with the rhyme. Maybe a spot of free verse would work? |
![]() ![]() ![]() BIG WORD! and omg u know the meaningn! ive read like 10 poems about idiosyncrasity and all of 3 knew what the word meant. Bravo.(*audience cheers*)oh..the poem was good 2. ~Nat~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() *sigh* That was great. Don't know what else to say. But I enjoyed it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is beautiful. You have so much talent. Keep writing! ~Damaged |