|Reviews for your idiosyncrasies|
| elze chapter 1 . 12/5/2004
I could really rap to this
| Arcania chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
Nice. You have a wonderful vocabulary, and use it well in your work.
| Asmodeus Sanity chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
i esp loved the ending tho the rest was good too
"didn't know if it was love or hate... but it surrendered"
i think thats realy tru 2 a lot of things
which makes it relateable
which makes it good
so good job...
| Enter The Coil chapter 1 . 7/23/2003
I really loved this one, it was really well written!
| kalariah chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
You have a gift for putting into words the emotions so many of us feel, that it's almost uncanny. I had a relationship similar to this once, except that it was I who walked on, and my dear friend who was left behind...
I wish a thousand times over that such a move was not necessary, but too often in the course of life we must make difficult choices. Great job on your poem.
| Tenika D chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
Wow . . . How sad . . . I really liked it, but . . . Wow . . . One thing, you might want to edit this just a bit. Y'know, capitalize the i's to I. Other than that, you've done a great job. This is probably the first poem that's made me want to cry.
| Amalia Janeway chapter 1 . 7/2/2003
Wow. Very moving. It's sad when things don't work out. I know. It's happened to me.
| Unchained Soul chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
Another amazing poem from you! I love your rhyming! It all rhymes but it's not too much. Perfect! I like the emotion expressed in this poem, especially the very last line.
| Megaroni chapter 1 . 6/27/2003
You've got the whole urban-romance thing going...very nice. I like your stuff. It's real and not fluff.
| oh-sweet-nothing chapter 1 . 6/24/2003
whoo! i like this one. it's really good.
| LottieLuck chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
That was really good. I liked it, kinda reminds me of one of mates. Keep writing.
| Incubabe chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
I like the idea but it struggles with the rhyme.
Maybe a spot of free verse would work?
| mmoonsshiner chapter 1 . 6/16/2003
BIG WORD! and omg u know the meaningn! ive read like 10 poems about idiosyncrasity and all of 3 knew what the word meant. Bravo.(*audience cheers*)oh..the poem was good 2.
| Suzanne Star chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
That was great. Don't know what else to say. But I enjoyed it.
| Damaged chapter 1 . 6/13/2003
This is beautiful. You have so much talent. Keep writing!