Reviews for I Will Come
firess chapter 1 . 9/20/2003
hey that was so awesome! you're a really good writer.
Basil Psyche chapter 1 . 6/12/2003
Nice description and I like the flow of words. Kind of freaky though. Cool.

anon63 chapter 1 . 6/11/2003
wow, thats nice! it flows really well and sounds almost like a chant. It has a magical touch and the last line is really powerful. Great rhyming too! Nice work! :-)
Misio chapter 1 . 6/11/2003
Very well written poem. It flows well and sounds like some sort of magical invocation. It has a dark atmosphere. At the beginning there is a feeling that the narrator is helpless but the last line makes her seem sinister.
Neried chapter 1 . 6/11/2003