Reviews for Tumble
reluctant writer chapter 1 . 10/12/2005
I really liked this. I felt something from it. "think of me as a bad memory/ that crawled across your face like an animal." Very creative line.
the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 8/27/2005
the summary last line alone are enough to earn you the title of... of... BLOODY EXCELLENT WRITER! oh yes. bathe in that rare glory ;):P
D chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
The science of questions.D.
Moon-Chaser chapter 1 . 12/9/2004
I love how you kept the connection of the pill right to the end. I love it.

Keep it up.
Soviet chapter 1 . 8/25/2004
A powerful poem. My only problem with it was the ending.
The ending was not good enough for a poem of this class... the ending wasn't well 'there' enough to actually give this poem closure.
However, you seem like a talented writer... I'll be sure to read all of your work...but with the mass of work you have, it might take time.
Mayhem6779 chapter 1 . 8/20/2004
Isn't it so true that even when we manage to overcome, we must still deal with what remains left over from before... We cannot deny who we were any more than we can deny who we are... Even when it means the things we'd like to forget...
VividShimmer chapter 1 . 6/11/2003
Another unique and beautiful idea.

I love how the title obscurely fits the poem.

blazeintheabyss chapter 1 . 6/11/2003
That was awesome. I love how you relate feelings to objects. I try to do that too. Keep up the good work!