Reviews for Endless Other Side
Isca chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
"A tune of silence and madness." I feel like that all of the time...

"Beautiful and forbidden." I can definitely relate to that, as the person I've liked for years, is 'beautiful and forbidden' :P

:) You're amazing! You have such a genuine way of connecting to the reader!
grip chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
i've been reading a lot of your older poems.. you used the word 'gray' a lot... anyways, i get the same feeling from this as i feel sometimes.. maybe i don't CARE for the person as much as i care for the feeling i have when i'm with somebody. good poem
D chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
It has always fascinated me on how the temperature of skin can change one's mood.D.
VividShimmer chapter 1 . 6/11/2003
"Water dripped its thorny edges over me like waves to the beach,"


Just remarkable.

Nice technique and idea.

Though I think that if you grouped certain lines together, it would have made the poem a lot stronger over all.
blinkie chapter 1 . 6/11/2003
beautiful and deep. it's very well-written. i noticed a typo though. "prey" should be "pray" _

i especially liked the lines

"Blame is a word that escapes me,

I learned to play a different song,

a tune of silence, and madness."

that's powerful!

this poem was a very good read. i thoroughly enjoyed it _

Jane Austen the 2nd chapter 1 . 6/11/2003
that had a very interesting tone and it was really deep. I enjoyed it a lot! Tell me if you think my poems are as deep!I would be honored if they even met to 1/20 of your standards!

pretty pink:)