|Reviews for Endless Other Side|
| Isca chapter 1 . 9/20/2008
"A tune of silence and madness." I feel like that all of the time...
"Beautiful and forbidden." I can definitely relate to that, as the person I've liked for years, is 'beautiful and forbidden' :P
:) You're amazing! You have such a genuine way of connecting to the reader!
| grip chapter 1 . 9/13/2005
i've been reading a lot of your older poems.. you used the word 'gray' a lot... anyways, i get the same feeling from this as i feel sometimes.. maybe i don't CARE for the person as much as i care for the feeling i have when i'm with somebody. good poem
| D chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
It has always fascinated me on how the temperature of skin can change one's mood.D.
| VividShimmer chapter 1 . 6/11/2003
"Water dripped its thorny edges over me like waves to the beach,"
Nice technique and idea.
Though I think that if you grouped certain lines together, it would have made the poem a lot stronger over all.
| blinkie chapter 1 . 6/11/2003
beautiful and deep. it's very well-written. i noticed a typo though. "prey" should be "pray" _
i especially liked the lines
"Blame is a word that escapes me,
I learned to play a different song,
a tune of silence, and madness."
this poem was a very good read. i thoroughly enjoyed it _
| Jane Austen the 2nd chapter 1 . 6/11/2003
that had a very interesting tone and it was really deep. I enjoyed it a lot! Tell me if you think my poems are as deep!I would be honored if they even met to 1/20 of your standards!