Reviews for Ode to Sugar
by-the-light-of-the-moon chapter 1 . 2/8/2004
great poem, very vivid descriptions, and it is nice to read a poem that id not really sad and serious for a change. :-)
mmoonsshiner chapter 1 . 9/11/2003
i too have been touched by neruda didnt quite like the style but its the thought that matters ...and oh what those thoughts can do 2 u.. did i mention i like the poem? maybe i should...~Nat~
Magpie Poet chapter 1 . 7/24/2003
you think that's bad. try keeping passover when everyone else is eating all that lovely easter candy ;)

and yes, this sounds good. i admit i've not read those neruda poems.
MistrissD chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
SUGAR! *bounces up an down* Now I want Peeps, dang, oh well, its such a cute poem, I know so many sugar-addicts that would die over this, great job .
Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 6/13/2003
You did very well! I give you an A
Kesshi Mashin chapter 1 . 6/13/2003
Cute, very much so. You did a lot better than ok. _ Keep on writin...
Red Masque chapter 1 . 6/12/2003
Hey. I was going to tell you: one of my friends just told me that it was a real show. i have no idea how they figure that... but, oh well. One thing: i was reading your bio and i saw that you liked MC Beaton. I thought i was the only person who's heard of her! I'm rereading Agatha Raisin and the Love from Hell. Gosh, i live around such uncultured ppl. Speaking of uncultured, i've never read any neruda, so i can't be the best judge, but i thought it was really good.
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 6/11/2003
Excellent work.

~Heart of the Sword