awesome...(speechless)...what a lot of emotion this poem gives off...great job..

Today you died; death was your place,
Today you died with a smile on your face.
Those two lines are impossibly powerful. I loved it.

Now this is serious talent. This poem would have to be my ABSOLUTE FAVOURITE! really. its amazing the amount of emotion you put into your work. The more emotion, the better. The ending line "today you died with a smile on your face" really tied the poem up well. A great ending to a great poem. keep em coming.

... I've never read a song like this, but i can't say i don't like it! pls write more songs!

hey luc, this is really great!

YOU HAVE SO MUCH TALLENT! DON'T HIDE Itt! O MY! keep on writin those poems...

Oh ashlee,

I hated this poem, it was crap, it was badly written, well it wasnt that bad, it was ok, u wrote it pretty well, it was good, it was great, i loved it, it was excelent. KEEP WRITING!

From Revenged_Child

absolutely wonderful poem, so bitter sweet, suicide poems are rarely this good, its like if ive seen one ive seen them all, but this is refreshingly differnt, you have talent

I generally rather liked the poem, though a few bits were rather strange... I just really liked the line "Today you died with a smile on your face." It was interesting.

nice poem... i really don't know what to say... but it's good that you let it out instead of keeping it in your heart...:)

What is this crap you speak of? I really liked this poem, kind of depressing though. I thought that it was really well written.