Reviews for The Black Goddess
Luthiena o Lorien chapter 1 . 8/19/2005
Beautiful...simply beautiful...
Phoenix-Pen chapter 1 . 7/8/2004
This is powerful. I don't know much about the Hindu faith, but I think i might do a bit of research on Kali now! I like the idea of a slightly feminist godess (to put it in horribly western terms). Thanks!
Johan Wolf chapter 1 . 5/21/2004
By the Goddess Herself this poem is brilliant. You perfectly capture the Divine Mother, Her power and Her dual nature, both as the nurturing mother and terrible devourer. Wonderful imagery, perfectly utilizing Her most common symbols. I loved your treatment of the subject and manner of writing. Keep it up!
Savak chapter 1 . 8/20/2003
Finally! Something about Hindu theology in this section. And not only is it something, it's something good! *g* Well done.
Chattox chapter 1 . 8/17/2003
Amazing. You convey the power of the Goddess so beautifully. This is definitely going on my Favorite Stories list.

~Bright Blessings~
Aisling Grey chapter 1 . 7/26/2003
I like this poem very much. I've always had a fascination with Kali and I even have quite a bit of jewelry with her image on it. I like the images you present and the intense feeling of the poem. Don't laugh, but I even have dreams, dark ones, about Kali (Kali-Ma, Kali-Yuga, the Dark Mother). They are extremely intense, vivid, and I remember every one of them. Sorry, didn't mean to ramble or scare you. Anyway, keep up the great work. Merry meet and merry part.
XxDarkGoddessxX chapter 1 . 7/19/2003

Your poem was beautifully written, it draws her image in your mind, I thank you ,for this is more of a tributation to her, she would be pleased.


~Gauri Devi~
dfgsfdghftgt44 chapter 1 . 6/30/2003
That was really cool. She sounds cool in a morbidly interesting way. I like it a lot.

~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
revengedemon chapter 1 . 6/30/2003
Nice description. I really like it, your style is awesome.
Plato's Optic Runaway chapter 1 . 6/25/2003
oh, very cool! it's quite lovely, acutally. i like it alot!
Alyx Bradford chapter 1 . 6/12/2003
I don't think Basil got it. But I liked it. Very descriptive, very good (if somewhat gory) imagery. True to the deity in question, I think. :)
Basil Psyche chapter 1 . 6/12/2003
Wow, that's morbid. Sorry, I don't have much knowledge of the Hindu religion. Was it suppose to rhyme or just be free words? Either way is okay.