Reviews for Irridescent Sacrifices
half-sketched.staccatos chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
konnichi wa

Heh heh... Cute. Very cute, actually. Usually, I'm not one for humor. Don't get me wrong, the element of humor in a story is great; but I don't like the ones dedicated solely to humor as opposed to just having it scattered a bit throughout the story. I was a bit hesitant on reading this, but I decided to anyway - great choice on my part. Kudos. :D

"The Devil must be having a busy day."

Hm, yeah, I'll bet. Or maybe it was because the devil really DIDN'T understand the meaningless gibberish the kid uttered.

"Oh well, At least he could add it to his bug collection."

*chuckles* Cute, cute.

Ha det

-Shan-

(P.S: This is Charmedgrl4ever from fanfiction in case you didn't realize that from the "konnichi wa.")
Lightness chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
oohh lol. that was very very amusing. if kids really went around asking for manuals on satanic rituals, id actually consider becoming a librarian. the story flowed wonderfully and your descriptions were really fun. you also did a great job of developing the character. loved the story. keep writing.
eXtreme eVolution chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
Extremely funny story! Subtle... It was hard to predict what was to come (that the "sacrifice" would become part of a bug collection). That part was the funniest! Keep it up! :)
Bobby Black chapter 1 . 12/5/2003
Very, very funny. I really liked it, especially the small glints of dark humor. Just a few comments. One, I guess towards the end you got over repetitive with the word "victim". It's all right, no biggie, but you can always try to use synonyms. Also one more thing, I wish I hadn't known before hand that the victim was a butterfly, cuz a surprise ending is always better than a fortold surprise ending.
Other than that, very excellent!
joie 610 chapter 1 . 11/30/2003
:) this story was both funny and freaky, and i mean really freaky. *shivers* kids these days! :P
in such a short piece, you described the main character and event nicely. bravo!
Oh well. At least he could add it to his bug collection now.
hehe, that was humorous ;)
please write more :D
Grace Hsia chapter 1 . 11/16/2003
Funny story! I really liked it quite a bit and it kept you guessing until the end.
Cruel Tutelage chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
I quite enjoyed that. :) Very short, but very sweet... rather like a butterfly's supply of blood.
Indigo Ziona chapter 1 . 9/5/2003
Hehehe... most amusing. Nice work! A butterfly? does seem a bit pathetic, somehow.
anonymous-birdie chapter 1 . 8/18/2003
You know, I think that is how Satanic Rituals first began: random chantings and kitchen-knife-stealing!

This story is really good, you have a great narrative, and your writing is really detailed. But can you write a bit more, if you do another chapter?

By the way, I never knew butterflies have black blood. How did you know that?

Please write more.

anonymous-birdie
Oort chapter 1 . 8/11/2003
0(Ò_Ó)0 Interesting. It doesn't seem like the salem witch trialls to me, but it could still be inspired by them. Good story. Now you have to update.
aegis chapter 1 . 7/19/2003
I'm trying to figure out how old this boy is. He sounds to me like a ten-year-old, about...a ten-year-old sacrificing butterflies to the devil. Cute and scary at the same time.
Kelpylion chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
This is somewhere between disturbing and hilarious. I love the way you make the piece slightly vague, letting the reader's mind wander off and imagine explanations for this bizarre ritual. Absolutely excellent.
DXFaintlySaneXD chapter 1 . 6/27/2003
Lol! 'The Devil must have a busy day' was funny and that he could add it to his bug collection. That kid is crazy.
Midnight Walker chapter 1 . 6/16/2003
I like the last line. Somehow, it is what pulls all of the humor together.