Reviews for Slice Me Up
Me chapter 1 . 3/29/2009
Oh wow. That was so heartbraking. I loved the repeated line 'Slice of bread, slice of knife. I don't care, its not my life.' I loved it. Keep writing and so sorry you had to go through this
Eirien chapter 1 . 6/4/2004
-! I can't find many words to say much about this right now, having gone through the same three things actually. Perhaps it kind of explains why I've felt so drawn to your poetry from the very first poem I read... Anyway, remember what I wrote in that other review on "Her arms, my arms". I have to stop reviewing now, but this certainly isn't the last you've heard from me. ;-)
CrimsonCat chapter 1 . 6/16/2003
omg.. that was.. beautiful. Heart-breakingly beautiful. I love it. I'm adding it to my fav's list - well done. (The emotion is so strong..)

Dai stiho
Fuinixe chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
Excellent flow. It put me close to tears. I'm sorry you've been through this. Keep writing.
Nizzles chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
Wow.

That was awesome. So angry and longing. I loved it.

Thanks for reviewing my peice of crap "Come On Concubine". Keep up the good work, you're a great writer.

**and kill whoever made you mad that you're referring to in the song**
Marisyle not signed in chapter 1 . 6/13/2003
I can relate... Nice poem..keep with the writing..
Silver Catalyst chapter 1 . 6/13/2003
OOh, that was so sad. :( But very good; i love emotional poems. Well done. It can't be easy writing about things like this.