Reviews for Trapped
AnnaSun chapter 1 . 10/8/2003

Well done another well written poem.

Thanks for sharing :)
Last-Chael chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
WOW! This is brilliant. It reminded me of a quote from Lord of the Rings: The Two Towers.

Éowyn: Women of this country learned long ago that those without swords may still die upon them. I fear neither death nor pain.

Aragorn: What do you fear, my lady?

Éowyn: A cage. To stay behind bars until use and old age accept them and all chance of valor has gone beyond recall or desire.

It really shows the feeling I think.

Take Care

Kyalia chapter 1 . 6/26/2003
I like the metaphors here.
cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
I liked this, very good poem. You describe that feeling of being trapped with no escape very well. Keep writing :)

Yaviewen chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
You have a gift with poetry... I'm jealous! Loved it!