|Reviews for Malcolm|
| The Grey Ghoul chapter 2 . 1/9/2006
another great chapter. but i must say i'm suspicious of octavia. i can see that malcolm has the normal low self esteem, but not only that he does seem sort of plain and octavia does seem to be that special sort of girl. i feel like she has an ulterior motive, and i dunno if i trust jon around octavia. he just seems a little weird, almost mysterious as to his real deeper emotions...
| The Grey Ghoul chapter 1 . 1/8/2006
i dont know if you remember my story, religion, but you faithfully left me many reviews, not just for that story, but others too. this was like two years ago. i havent put up a story in a long time. but i think i will again...
this chapter was long but it kept my attention the whole time. everything is awesome. and i love the whole sarcastic tone of voice in everything. lol. i only wish i had started reading your stuff sooner. i will definitely read the rest of this story.
| CandehFeind chapter 22 . 7/11/2005
BRILLIANT story! I just can't stop reading it! :o...
I simply love it, hope you update soon ;)
| tara cools chapter 22 . 6/15/2005
i've decided i really like jayce. nathan is annoying.
| tara cools chapter 21 . 6/15/2005
oh man, i can really see the change in Malcolm's character in this chapter. i love this story soo much.
| Differenciategirl chapter 22 . 5/29/2005
I think you should be famous! Have another chapter up soon pa pa please!
| Arayuldawen chapter 22 . 4/29/2005
oh my goodness! Get the next chapter up as soon as possible. Things are really getting so good. With the custody battle, and everything that's going on with Octavia, I really want to see what happens!
Hehe. this is such a great story. As I already said, update as soon as possible _
| LookAtTheStars chapter 22 . 4/26/2005
I just love this story.
| Whatyoukeepdoing chapter 22 . 4/5/2005
Come back! I love your stories! xx
| Le Sage chapter 22 . 4/4/2005
you. are one sick girl. Why do you love gays? are you gay? malcom should get over with his sucky life and just die.
| purple sea chapter 22 . 4/4/2005
huh? 'its jordan'? Im confused.
| Jessica chapter 22 . 4/3/2005
People Jordan is Octavia's brother. Remember?
| Twisted By Design chapter 22 . 4/2/2005
Who's Jordan? I don't know if you've mentioned him before...if so, it's been so long that I don't remember who he is. Dammit. That's going to bother me.
So yeah, the chapter...I love Malcolm's dad. I just...do. I'm glad that Malcolm has a good shot at being able to live with his father, instead of his mom. As I'm sure you're aware, I'm not a fan of his mom anymore.
Octavia...I really hope Malcolm doesn't get back together with her. I mean, I know he likes her and is over what happened, but I'm not big on forgiving betrayal of any sort. So, blah her.
So, is Malcolm going to find himself hanging around Jayce more often? I'd like to see him around Jayce more because jayce seems like an OK guy. I...hope? You have a way with making people seem one way and then BAM they turn out to be the complete opposite. Nathan, for example. He apologized. Wowzers. Didn't see that coming.
Yeah, this review is going to be short because it's 315 in the morning. I wrote about most of the chapter, but I'm tired and not feeling very...awake? So, good job, update soon.
| murky chapter 22 . 4/1/2005
At least the word "sequel" means that Malcom ain't gonne die, I think? ) And, well, thanks for updating.
| Kat chapter 22 . 4/1/2005
Great chapter! Now you better update soon! I want to know what happened to Jordan. Later.