|Reviews for What Makes You Happy|
| iustus chapter 1 . 6/12/2004
Like I said earlier, you need to do freeverse writing because you don't have a wide enough english vocabulary for structered verse. The best stanza in this poem was the second one for the first three verses.
I also believe that you can't find simple happiness because happiness is so elusive, so fleeting that once you catch hold of it, it goes away to be sought after again.
| laerai chapter 1 . 6/11/2004
I like the twist in words in the first and last stanzas. I think the third stanza, lines one, two and maybe three need the actions to be separated somehow. A semicolon, an '&' or perhaps divide it and make a new line? It runs in together too much.
I do like the fact that you were exploring new topics. Nice.
| trashCAN chapter 1 . 5/2/2004
Oh goodness, this poem is truly wonderful! I love it dearly. You have a very big talent! I usually hate poems that don't rhyme, but I adore all your poems.
| Light in my eyes chapter 1 . 12/17/2003
And I am sure you do make children happy, Girls laugh, you wipe away tears and make them laugh, and I cant even pick out one bad thing about you.
So Be Happy. :)
| Soulist chapter 1 . 7/7/2003
I'm Happy!Seriously I liked that because I have "happy" issues. Oh by the way is your heart made of gold or something?
| Incubabe chapter 1 . 6/23/2003
This poem is very meaningful. I liked it a lot; I think it is the smaller things in life that make us rich.
| Theo chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
Oh I absolutely love this! It is so true, we cannot define one by another.
"To make people remeber your good deeds
And make them forget your bad ones"
I like that a lot! Keep up the good work!
| MidNightVisions chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
This poem is very good and very true. Keep writing!
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
sweet and very true, like it muchly, a good moral to it and has a nice flow, excellent job
| Ixyavi chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
Very interesting perspective and true in its own way.
| The Wanlorn chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
::Starts to sing:: THese are a few of my favorite things... LoL.
~~Nire the Evil~~
| aPPle-FrrEAk chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
Friends are the people who will sing you the song of happiness when you forget the words. People with friends are richer than people with coins. I like the break of stanzas! keep writing!
| CancerianQueen chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
| Shush Don't chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
Loved it. Its very positive. I myself find it hard to get inspired by positive things. Kudos to you! The simplicity is real nice too. Great job!
| Zainab chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
This is a very good poem. Not that many people out there who aren't brainwashed by the media and society. I like this one a lot. Beautiful, simple, and sweet.