Reviews for Denise's Tornado
kento-14 chapter 1 . 7/10/2004
It was a short story but good none the less i wish the charicters where discribed more or the house but then again that leaves more for the imaginaton. I love how realistic you made it also.
Diana Shore chapter 1 . 9/22/2003
Again, good story, but there was a lot of punctuation errors. This sentence gave a good picture "It was like looking into a life-sized dollhouse." Take care - D.