you know, if i were that girl in the cage, i'd rebel SO much...I'd be like, "SCREW YOU MAN, IMA SCREAM SO THAT THE AUTHORITIES WOULD COME!" But then again, he'll kill me, won't he? :/

I had to stop reading. The story had such a sudden change in tone in this chapter. The characters changing so drastically and making me feel more and more lost. Suddenly, little to no fear? Love replacing it entirely? My head hurts. Sorry.

Its a very interesting story but the perspective changes are a bit harsh and hurt the story a bit. Otherwise, it keeps me reading.

I really enjoy this story the plot is good and the characters interesting the only complaint I have about it is that you seem to be mixing time periods together every now and then you will make references that sound as if the story is occurring in the present instead of the past. Other than that this is an amazing story

This is going to sound weird...no okay it isn't. I mean it as a compliment but you write really good sex scenes!. Okay that was a vast statement but I mean every romantic touch that Eliza and Elaias share seems to be really sensual and believable. I think a good writer creates the scene but an even greater writer makes me think I'm there. You're truly gifted consider sending this to a publisher I'll be certain to buy it! :)

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I like this story a lot. Can't wait to read the other chapters.

Aw...the poor vampire's smitten. Oh wells. That's what you get for being a monster.

Wow this is a really good start to hte story. I don't see why you would have asked if it sucked, lol.

Yes! yes of course I like it! It was wonderful, mean vampire though, gosh. I can't wait to read more, keep up the awesome work!

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It started to get interesting when she got turned but why no update? Please continue. I hate half finished stories.

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Aww... I hope you come back to finish this story... I really love it.

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Magnificent!