Reviews for Time
Arcania chapter 1 . 6/16/2004
That's cute. I liked it for it's simplicity and pain.
Catella Estelle chapter 1 . 12/14/2003
Dwee...that was good!
A wee bit confusing but good!
Great work!
~ Little Dog Muse
Ana Muune chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
Sorta confusing personally, but i think i got what it was saying. it's sad to say the least, but i love it. It's brilliant.
Algul Siento chapter 1 . 11/16/2003
very good. i like it alot. you deserve to be one anyones fav list. damn good stuff.

Zhao Zilong
Galene chapter 1 . 8/24/2003
aw i loved it!

nice job with the rhyming.. didn't get all corny _

*sits n contemplates*

i can't think of what else to say

so.. for now i'll bid you good day!


illuzionist69 chapter 1 . 8/13/2003
omg dis poem woz so bloody awesome!
Phoenix Raven chapter 1 . 8/9/2003
very damn good. i love your stuff!
Michael Craig .inactive chapter 1 . 8/3/2003
The poem itself exudes the mystique that you yourself are getting lost in the poem. You follow the lines until the end, but seemingly lose yourself in them, even as you are comprehending them. Great poem.
Autumn tears chapter 1 . 7/29/2003
Beautiful poem, I loved the obsecure rhyming scheme :D
Mime chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
Yeah, time is a mysterious element. I suppose we'll never know everything about it.
redwriter00 chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
Wow, you are really good! dont read any of my stuff cuz it sucks but u had better keep writing dude.. its awsome.
Pirouette chapter 1 . 7/27/2003
Intruging, very interesting and quite unique. It shows a lot and it tells much more. Keep on writing.
Sycho Skitz chapter 1 . 7/27/2003
Me I said before...I love your stuff (including the rhyming). It all flows so well. This one and 'Hurt' are my faves...keep on writing!

JadeFox chapter 1 . 7/27/2003
"If time could really heal all wounds, than time would be one's friend, but some wounds just grow over time, so time can also be one's enemy." That came to my mind reading this. It's really a wonderful poem and a well written piece of art! Love it!


Karla Nakada chapter 1 . 7/26/2003
dose time heal.

i would like to belive it dose but..

i belive we try and forget it all

roll it up in a ball

destory it, burn it,make it become nothing but air.

and it will always be there.

just in tiny peices of air.

we say we got over it but that is not ture.

when you think about it

it still makes you blue.

The Great Critic,

red karla
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