Reviews for Keep The Westlife Pride Alive
SarcasmIsPoetry chapter 1 . 1/2/2009
I love Nicky Byrne too! Yeah! Let's keep the Westlife Pride alive!
pointythings chapter 1 . 10/1/2005
The concept is good, and I like how you attempt to keep it detailed; I like detailing. However, the rhyme scheme is very generic, and you seem to be rhyming at every cost. I think you should keep it to free verse, and maybe cite even more specific things that have happened between your friend and her boyfriend. Also, I don't think you should tell us his name. Maybe, maybe his first name, but certainly not his last. It makes it seem to formal. Also, I think if you want to write about 'Westlife Pride,' you should keep it to another poem. This poem is about Nicky, and the Westlife Pride reference is just kind of random and in writing,~pointythings~
Merit Somnia chapter 1 . 6/6/2004
Very cute. Powerful in your devotion.
sk8rshiloh chapter 1 . 5/10/2004
aww that's so sweet!
waterbaby chapter 1 . 12/7/2003
really nice. and well writen.
Steph chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
hehe you know I love this one! hehe Westlife Forever! :)
Vivian chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
thanx for the poem! it's awesome! well... nicky's going to get married... maybe i shall juz forget him... anyway, i think i'll make a poem 4 u 2! wait 4 it!
Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
Awesome! I love poems that rhyme! hehe, I'm part Irish, but, Go Westlife, yeah!