Reviews for My Tattered Black Umbrella
Chlorinated Pi chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
wow, that was really deep and well written. great work.
Simply-Me-637 chapter 1 . 7/29/2003
Wow...Your imagery, emotion, all well put to where the reader is there. Well done, well done indeed.
Jane Austen the 2nd chapter 1 . 7/1/2003
You started with an interesting topic lol I wasnt expecting what I read! This was a good poem! Nice work!

pretty pink:)

ps. lol I liked your review of yourself on one of your previous poems! Ha ha
ShadowSpirits chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
How many times have you changed you penname? Oi, make up your mind XD! Funny, I think I can kind of relate this to a scene in Kingdom Hearts oo;; Maybe I'm just weird...
GM Himura chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
I like it. I would interpret as the umbrella was someone who protected you, but they passed away...?
Kanashimi Ame chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
I like it alot _ the title is very unique

Ugh, i *kinda* read your profile, it's LoNg o.O but don't worry, mine used to be kinda long, but i condenced it, heh.

Thank you for your review on my poems-


The flying spatula chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
that was really good!