|Reviews for I was abandoned by faith|
| Silver Phoenix Falling chapter 1 . 6/23/2003
Wow. This is extremely good!
| Strina chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
I love your phrasing in the first half of the second stanza.
| recalcitrant chapter 1 . 6/16/2003
hey that was a good poem. you are a good writer maybe one of my favorites. if u want you should read some of my poems and review them to let me know if u like or hate them ( and or what u like or hate about them) i suggest ("time", "life(or a small part of it)", "you f* c* and girl1/girl2) thanx
| Sapphire-Musings chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
Wow. The visualistaion in this was so powerful! I loved it! You have some definate talent here, alot more then some, I advice you to keep using it for sure!
Keep it up and blessed be