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SPAMMER chapter 11 . 4/7/2012
Kory and katryn shouldend up together and Im sure sean shouln't end up with kacey shes a snobbish bitch and hes a hot gentleman.
Binkybaby chapter 11 . 1/14/2012
I liked it. Update soon.
XsaekostarX chapter 5 . 10/26/2011
I enjoyed this chapter, I'm not sure I would call it a filler as such, it seemed more of an introduction for Sean and some more defining of Madison's changes. One critque is that there aren't any indicators of a change in time. Just one more space, would make that more evident and easier to read. Great chapter, and story so far. I look forward to reading the rest. ;)
XsaekostarX chapter 1 . 10/26/2011
Very nice first chapter, definitely captured my attention and interest, I look forward to seeing his Madison changes throughout this story. Good job.
leavesfallingup chapter 11 . 10/10/2011
She is an extremely forgiving person. I am curious: what happened to all of the partiers who were sprawled around the house when she dropped him off before?

You are excused for your past inconsistency in posting new chapters... as long as you get in front of your computer and get two work on the next ten chapters now.

Thanks for the fun read. I sincerely hope that there will be more soon.
leavesfallingup chapter 10 . 10/10/2011
To have your first kiss from someone who just threw up... ughhh! The boy deserves to have his mother come home and find that mess.
leavesfallingup chapter 9 . 10/10/2011
That was ugly. At least Kory told her the truth. It is sad when guys make a habit of using people to get what they want. Had he simply been nice in earnest, then he might have ended up with a beautiful girlfriend who truly cared about him.

Oh well. It was good that she discovered the truth when she did.
leavesfallingup chapter 8 . 10/10/2011
Why do I suspect that it will be Madison and Kory in the end? Maybe I'm wrong. Zack could definitely win the day, but the two don't seem right. You are doing an excellent job with developing the story. The pacing is good, the characters feel real, and most are likeable (except for the ones who shouldn't be).

I am curious about what will happen when Seth returns from the horse trip. His girlfriend sounds like a real whiner, which wouldn't impress most guys. He may return with his eyes opened and looking for a different type of girl.
leavesfallingup chapter 7 . 10/10/2011
I would have jumped at the idea of the horse trip, but that is just me. Allergies provided the perfect catalyst for throwing her into the presence of two guys, alone, for the entire week. Oh boy!
leavesfallingup chapter 6 . 10/10/2011
As I suspected: Madison is actually beautiful. Did she not know this because she hid behind bookish habits and a mop of hair? Or is she only now beginning to attain her true beauty (that happens in my family. The girls tend to blossom late and then they all turn into stone foxes).
leavesfallingup chapter 5 . 10/10/2011
Oh, how cruel irony can be. Her "prince" turns out to be the boyfriend of her arch-enemy.

The one scene at the gas station was very frightening. It make you wonder how often something like that takes place on the road.
leavesfallingup chapter 4 . 10/10/2011
That would have been a fun scene to watch. It would have been funnier if Kacey had ordered the desert for her... that would have been true irony.

I was a little confused about the forks. How was she ending up with so many? Besides the extras that she requested, she must have collected the forks from others at the table. But if Kory was doing the same, how did they get so many? Sorry for being dense.

What were they intending to do with the forks?
leavesfallingup chapter 3 . 10/10/2011
Okay, you're doing a great job of keeping me laughing. I'm in a public setting here, so could you back it off a little! Okay, just joking. The scene at the counter was excellent. It couldn't have gone much worse unless the boy cashier had to call out for a price-check on a bra or something.

It is beginning to appear that her self-appraisal is not quite accurate. I am curious about what she truly looks like.
leavesfallingup chapter 2 . 10/10/2011
I loved the list. Very creative. I laughed during several parts, but most of all when she finally gave in and wrote the fiftieth resolution.

I look forward to reading more. Thank you.
Bubbly Girl chapter 11 . 5/15/2010
GAH! This story i AMAZING! But you haven't updated in almost 5 WHOLE YEARS! Where are you? PLEASE update SOON! :)

Peace, Love and Happiness! :)

~Bubbly Girl
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