|Reviews for While You Were Sleeping|
| Knightley chapter 1 . 7/14/2006
you're right that this isn't your usual style... but i see think it's actually really good! yes, change is a good thing.
| pieces chapter 1 . 6/9/2004
The ending's kind of rough, like you couldn't figure out what to place there. I liked the description, but again, it sounded forced. I don't know, maybe I'm just not used to the fluffy stuff (it's usually morbid and angsty). It's good though. Just ... different. Not many people try to capture moments like this, let alone succeed in it. Keep writing.
| samothrace chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
Aww... :) Very sweet and cute. Now I'm going to have that warm, fuzzy feeling the rest of the day... Not that I'm complaining, mind you... :D
| Unfinished Author chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
sweet, really sweet such raw emotion in this story i could feel the tension, maybe try adding a little more description, (but then i like descriptive stories so thats probably a bias opinion) Very close to home. Brilliantly written well done!
| black-winged-dragon chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
aww thts really sweet:)
i wanna know wht happens next? :)
| Twisted Spoon chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
Aw... What a sweet story! I'm glad they're together then. . hehe