Reviews for shade
anon63 chapter 1 . 6/16/2003
damn... that was very unusual... dark, depressing, one correction:

and loose sight as the haze and the vision all blur

should be lose

anyways, i liked it a lot. favorites. it flows really well, i read it aloud in a sort of whisper-chant shit thing, a little disturbing, a little hypnotizing and entrancing, very enjoyable :-)

keep up the good work!
hookedontherush chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
wow i love this

uve expressed what others can only dream of doing

im at a loss of what to say other than amazing
crazyspongiegurl chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
wow...that was good...i loved the feeling...the pain...and your portrayel of death...wow...you have some dep thoughts don't you?