I want you to continue...if you have problems getting mad just listen to some aggressive music. Works for me everytime, cause music affects your moods even unconciously. Keep up the good work...i have one thought thow...how in the world could Macao have some connection with her...unless he was alive back when the curse took place...dizzying...

You should continue it whether or not you're pissed off! it's an excellent story. I don't know why I never heard about the second chapter until I checked, but still, please update a.s.a.p! I love this story!

Thanks!

*Countess De Lioncourt*

i reali liked ur stori and i reali think you should keep writing and i liked the dream sequence i think if u keep this stori going ur gonna get loads reviews

you dont like the rest of your chapter? but its funny... ho hum. owell. hope you update. the story sounds great so far.

krissa

Good-the only thing I thought was messed up was how they didn't even care that Maggie died. But I understand that this family obviously shuns the older siblings so it does make sense. Anyways, you should keep going, later

CONTINUE! Please? This girl reminds me of me if only I had more black stuff. I love to read. And I want a tatoo. I hate preps. Matter of fact, I usually hate everyone I don't know. Some of my friends I hated before I knew them. but I dun give ppl much of a chance so, eh, whatever! Actually, i feel I get to knnow ppl when they're writing. Just like they know me. And what they read. I read stuff about magick, and vampires. My fave authors are Raymond E. Fiest, Anne Rice, J.K Rowling, and I think that's it. Anyway! I WANNA MEET A VAMPIRE! I WANNA MEET LESTAT DE LIONCOURT! *fake sobs* So pls update asap! I lub vampires cause of how much death they cause, and I'm very interested in death. Dun noe y tho. So, again, update!

Much lub,

*Countess De Lioncourt*

I liked it and your writing style is great, but I think that you foreshadowed the upcoming vampire a little too much with "I sometimes hope that a vampire or something'll bite me, and then I won't exactly die. But I probably won't get that lucky. I mean, vampires aren't even real. I only had three more years to live."

Besides that, I liked the story. Macao seems like a bastard, but that could work for him. Why is he interested in Naomi? Is she special somehow? Does it relate to the fact that she looks different from the rest of her family? Who put the curse on the family? What's the whole story? What are Macao's intentions?

I loved Naomi's character, and I also loved the family. If they're given distinctive personalities, that'd be great, so they wouldn't just be cliches of a hated family member that so many stories are about.

I hope you don't mind how much I'm reviewing, but your story has some real potential to be friggin brilliant. Please, keep writing.

I had a character girl named Naomi in one of my stories! It's cool that someone else has that name. Er, anyways...I liked it. Plz continued.

Darkness binds that of which is forbidden to fly

~~ Faded Wings ~~