Realized, in hindsight, I never actually reviewed your stuff. Excellent job on this one, it's one of the better here (excusing the fact that Demonia is incomplete.)
Even if I do hate you for the ending. _

This was great...what do you mean its over? I read all of that for a cliff hanger? plz tell me your going to write another story and finish it or something! you cant stop there! *pokes* plz write more! This was amazing!

i really infoyed this story so sequel, sequel, seqiel

I demand a sequel. I printed out 26 pages of this story in 6.5 print Arial and got a cliff-hanger ending. Which, in the "waiting for pro-authors to release their next friggin' book so I can worship the ground they walk on" phase of my bored life, I'm really irritable about. Don't take this as me taking my anger of everyone not updating on you, becuase I'd have to say this is one of the best stories of ever read. And I've read A LOT. You should read the book "Does Freddy Dance?" by..er..forget his name...
Anyways, among my ranting, I wish greatly and shall worship the ground YOU walk on (mostly because you too love Demon Diary ) if you make a sequel! Love your story lots!
-Drazuki and her gay bosom buddy, Logan (who also begs, pleads, and threatens for a sequel.)

Wow... That was good, kinda a tear jerker. I'm actually kinda glad Misha didn't get together with Jay, I think they should be friends because Jay could never love Misha like he deserves. But I'm like totally begging you to do a sequal on Tim and Misha, because I loved them together... they were so perfect, cause I seriously think he loved Misha... so PLEASE do a sequal... I'm completely begging.. I'll even IM you to ask! I swear.. -begs- please? Okee... I'm done, lol. Well please do! Great story!

Coyote: **scratches his chin** Enough people eh? MUSES! UNITE! Spirit Animals UNITE!
Malard: SEQUEL!
Rain: Oh dear Ra...
Sparky: SEQUEL!
Styorm: SEQUEL!
Set: SEQUEL!
Sacrum: SEQUEL!
Popaguye: SEQUEL!
Weebo Joe: SEQUEL!
Little Owl: SEQUEL!
Tiki: SEQUEL!
Eagle Eye: SEQUEL!
Little Wolf: SEQUEL!
River Wind: SEQUEL!
James: SEQUEL!
Jeff: SEQUEL!
Rain: that's not all of them surprisingly...but...I'm tired so they're GOING TO SLEEP!
All in unison: AWW! Do we have to?
Rain: YESH!
All: MEEP! **run to their beds/homes/what have you...

Coyote: **mumbling things lik, "Must go kill Homophobes...Jay must get Capt. Winky cut off, unles he chooses to use it..." and twitching**
Rain: ermm...yeah...JAY! USE IT NOW! He'll Cut it off I KNOW HE WILL!

COYOTE-Kun REVIEW TIME/STYLE!
"I sipped at my soda when I saw Misha come down the stairs. I raised an eyebrow. He wore a nice, really thin zip up sweater that had egg shell white strips at the bottom, with his matching pants and shoes. His hair was all flared out, and I could tell he had on some make-up...which was utterly disturbing to me, but I didn't say anything."
Coyote: STOP frontin! You know you wanna jump him right then and there, lock the adults out, and take him right then and there on the stairs...at least I DO! _
""Misha, I'm not gonna slow dance with a guy…even of it is you..."
"Please," He gave me his biggest, most pathetic puppy dog eyes ever. I could feel the stares of the students on me as Misha held my hand half on and half off to dance floor.
"No, Misha, I don't feel comfortable doing it." I said sternly, he bowed his head and whimpered a quiet okay. We sat back down and drank some punch.
Coyote: You know you wanna rub your body against his, feel your hard large member pressed against his frail form...take him to the bathroom or a broom closet, and fuck his brains out in hot passionate love/sex! ...at least...I DO!
Rain: o_0...Oh no...he's getting happy again...
"I really like you, too, Misha," I said, confessed, was he trying to express his thanks or something? He eyes look saddened.
"No, Jay, I don't think you understand what I say...I really like you...I care about you, Jay...I'm in love with you..."
I was silent for a minute...the force of what he really said didn't hit me with its full force at first...
"You-..you're...you're gay?"
Coyote: None too bright is this one?
Rain: Be nice!

Coyote: AW! SHO CUTE!
Rain: indeedy...question though...when you said/typed/whathaveyou; "Misha had discarded his expensive Moneat printed jacket (a gift by Tim of course) onto the couch and lay down with a huff." Did you mean Monet printed jacket? Like the painter Monet? it's spelled like that, but has an accent mark like my name, Dessira'...it may not have on I'm not too sure, I can look it up for you however!
Coyote: **shakes his head** Shut up andl isten to the pretty Evanescense chick!
Rain: OKies! Good story! And you're on Chapter 16, next chapter that I'm heading to is 17 hun...

Rain: EVIL EVIL Cliff-y Hanger Lady! I let Coyote Loose! He STILL doesn't get his boxers back though! :oD
Coyote: **sitting next to Rain onthe floor, blanket wrapped around him, sitting "Indian Style" with a small collar and leash on his neck** Is da leash neccassary?
Rain: if you want ya boxers back...yesh!
Coyote: Darn...**looks up to the computer** Good story Lady M'am! **nods his head, and rest it on Rain's leg**
Rain: So cute! **pets his head, and giggles as he purrs**
I SO need a life...

Rain: SOMEONE's IN L~URV! Hehe!
**screams and bangs are hear in the closet under the stairs** Ermm be right...back...**grabs a nearby banana and walks into the closet, screams of, "AGH NO! Not my PURTY-IES! Scooby is the protector of Captain Winky and da Cre~ew!" and a few, "AGHH! no! I'm blind EVIL LIGHTy-NESH! ...Bananas do NOT go there!" and of course; :Ish cold in hea!" whimpers are head, as Rain walks back out of the closet, banana now gone, in it's place a few polaroid pictures clutched tightly to her chest, a pair of Scooby Doo boxers, anda LARGE grin on her face** Okies! All done! Good story!
...I need a life...and yeah I can only write in 3rd person present tense, and first person/third person past tense...

Rain: YAYA! Outa da bathroom! I locked Coyote-kun in the closet underthe stairs...no morel emons...they make him...happy...anywayz...Tim is a sweet heart, Misha and Jay need to get their freak on! And add bananas! (inside joke with friends at school, and on Nieni Springs and her muse Nite, and mine Styorm on ) and...yeah...hey..TIm-erz...wanna go shoppin? And you didn't decribe what happened in Hot Topic! MY FAVORITE STORE! WAH! erm...yeah...onto the next chapter, before my mom wakes up and forces me to go to bed...1:50 AM...yeah..wah!

Bilbo the Talking Banana: They're all in the bathrooms...horny bizzes! And WHAT thet hell is it with them and BANANAS? Ermm...ehh-heh great story? And ermm yeah...OH BLOODY HELL! I can HEAR them! gah-ness! **puts in ear plugs, which promptly fall off as he has no ears** WHAT THE BLOODY HELL? I 'ave no ears! AAGH! **runs fromt he room screaming**
I'm running out of muses...and Coyote won't let me leave the bathroom...hehe

Rain: er...Seti-kun and Styorm-y-Sempai...are ermm...busy...**looks to the batroom door where loud thumps and "Oh yeah take it!"'s are heard** Ehh-heh.. 0_*;;
Coyote: Ya know...you DO have more than one bathroom...
Rain: 0_o good story me go buh bye now! **grabs COyote and bolts up the stairs to the second bathroom**

Seti: AAh the Bathroom...
Styorm: Yesh YESh! Good times eh?
Seti: Wonderful Times! . wanna continue the "good times"? **wink** **wink**
Styorm: HELLAH YEAH! :oD
Seti: **grins, grabs Styorm and runs into the bathroom locking the door**
Great story...sorry about me and my nutzo muses...