Wasn't it Angelina Jolie and her first husband that wore vials of blood at their wedding? I always thought that was rather bizarre, but the way you wrote such an amazing story based on that is just...well, amazing ]

The alarm clock part had me freaked out before I realized it was, well, an alarm clock. But the ending? Yeah, that was creepy. Loved this chapter! ]

Is Weston the killer? Cause he's damn creepy, and getting his grubby fingerprints all over the crime scene. And didn't he draw the sketch as well as show up where he wasn't supposed to be right after the chase? Well, I'm going to finish the story now so I can find out ] Awesome chapter once again!

Shoot, the end was creepy. But the argument between Faith and Tyler...hilarious! ]

This is such an amazing story! And the serial killer...yeah, he sounded pretty creepy and deranged-but I suppose you're right, serial killers' minds are undoubtedly filled with perversion and derangement. I'm going to end my review here, because I seriously can't wait to read the next chapter! ]

I really really really enjoyed this chapter-the pancakes scene at the beginning had me smiling like an idiot, and I honestly don't think I stopped grinning once while reading ]

"Faith was a firm believer that lying by omission was not really lying at all."

I don't know why but I found that line beyond hilarious ] And the characters are awesome! And the suspense is amazing as well ]

All of your stories are just amazing! I already red Blood Red Roses, so I'm reading them out of order, but eh. As for the prologue, I think the length was perfect, and I am most definitely NOT bored to tears...more freaking out about the awesomeness of this story actually ]

I've been a fan of your short stories for a while and decided to try one of your longer ones. I like the idea, but there are a lot of typos and oddly worded sentences so far. For example, "It's been a rough night and neither Adele, the detectives nor me deserve any of your wrath." It should be "Nor I". "Go to sleep. You look like horrible," "You look like you got hit head on by a tractor trailer." And, "He called the only phone number that the man he wanted would answer." This is an example of an oddly worded sentence. It isn't very smooth, and sounds very awkward. It needs editing, but so far I like the idea.

"Hell, you were practically begging for it! Look, no you got me made."

Made should be mad

I just read every single one of your stories (except the unfinished ones) and love them (favourites gotta be the famous guy and the boat).

I love this story! The plotline travels at a fast rate with believable twists and turns. The characters are all interesting with their personal flaws and abilities. I think you're a great writer and I can't wait to read more of your stories!

I'm absolutely amazed that you wrote this story at 15 years old. It was a really well written story, be very proud of yourself! Thanks for sharing. :)

Before he could reply, her mouth was on his and her pants were unbuttoning his shirt. Her hands travelled lightly over his muscles and stopped to trace a small scar on his left shoulder. "What happened here?"

"her pants were unbuttoning his shirt..." i think you meant hands?

and you spelled "traveled" wrong.

but other than that, this story, and all your others, are quite amazing. ]

-amulya

HAHAHA CUTE!

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