Reviews for Canaries
bettyinthewomb chapter 1 . 12/3/2003
heavy, i like the ending.
i'm a bit confused as to why Barry didn't AT ALL try to make up an explanation for calling him Jimmy, such as he was helping her fix something, or something, but maybe she really wanted to get it all off her chest? anyway, i like it. My favorite line was the bastard line, it was funny and relieved a bit of the tension without dropping the action.
Could you please read and review my play Stranger Than Fiction?
Nathaniel Cardeu chapter 1 . 6/16/2003
Nice! Very nicely written. Well thought out.

Good Job! Let's see some more!
Katherine chapter 1 . 6/16/2003
*pause* Wow. That's...incredible. Just one little nitpick: at the very beginning, Barry calls Frank Fred. (Dear God; Jimmy AND Fred. Quite a bit of adultery in Barry's life. _-) Apart from that, this was a perfect one-scene play.
TheTiramisuOfImpendingDoom chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
ah, the tension is fantastic, but i especially loved barry's last statement. awesome play... if you do continue this, it would be wonderful...