|Reviews for Perfect Word|
| Mishael chapter 1 . 7/3/2003
Oh this is wonderful! So wistful and sad, I love it! The way you avoid cliches and use tiny little half rhymes to help the flow of the poem...it's just great :)
| Kyuukei chapter 1 . 7/2/2003
Yeah, a guy, yeah, is reveiwing poetry about love. -Ahem- Anyway. I'd like to say, being a romantic guy myself, I thought it was very beautiful. Keep up the good work.
| Caitir chapter 1 . 6/27/2003
That's sad. Good but sad.
| Baby Milo chapter 1 . 6/22/2003
That's so good!
| M. E. Griffin chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
Well done! Sad, but beautiful. Isn't it interesting that the most beautiful works tend to be the most tragic?
| No7h1ng chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
hm... this is interesting. :) i like the part about showing the rags beneath the velvet. i also liked the end... quite deep :) nice writing! _ (and thank you for the review!)
| AngelEyes101 chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
This poem was AMAZING! Your choice of words flowed so easily together, which made the poem so much easier to read and picture in your mind.
| Hotness and Coolness am I chapter 1 . 6/18/2003
M. Trust only those whom you are sure of, and find that word to reach them. This poem is a great illustrator of deep and dark secrets that none may want to know...shadows in the mists of thought...
| recalcitrant chapter 1 . 6/16/2003
hey that was a good poem. you are a good writer and i see u improving. if u want you should read some of my poems and review them to let me know if their are bad ok good yada yada. i suggest ("time", "be where i want to be", "you f* c* and girl1/girl2) thanx
| wildtenderness chapter 1 . 6/16/2003
was BEAUTIFUL!i really like the poem;).it's well-expressed and nicely written.