Reviews for Moving on
Kyalia chapter 1 . 6/22/2003
I like how you reversed the final saying- made it less cliched.
recalcitrant chapter 1 . 6/16/2003
hey that was a good poem. you are a good writer and i see u improving. if u want you should read some of my poems and review them to let me know if their are bad ok good yada yada. i suggest ("time", "be where i want to be", "you f* c* and girl1/girl2) thanx