|Reviews for When You Smile|
| the mouse that roared chapter 1 . 5/11/2004
This is a really sweet song/poem. It makes me smile just to see someone smile about someone smiling. heehee. It's so pretty...
| becca chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
I love the emotion poured into this - how many times have a thought like this about my best friends? This is magnificently written and moving, thanks.
| strongwind chapter 1 . 9/25/2003
i never knew what a great and terific friend you are- a really real poem!
| KayWest chapter 1 . 8/7/2003
This is exactly what I've been trying to say to a friend of mine, who has also been going through hard times. Thank you.. this is truly wonderful.
| Aureya of Chocolate chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
i LOVED that
you're so full of talent, did you know that? of course you did, i bet people tell you that ALL THE TIME
| Inoperative chapter 1 . 7/6/2003
i really like this one. my favorite part had to be the last four lines. and i really liked this bit: "Like a sunflower opening in early morn /After years of being scared to try..."
yeah, i felt that was very poetic...
| Kezarahk chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
Sweet; a rejoicing with those who rejoice.
| Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 6/26/2003
This is lovely. Every word is just so right and fitted well, harmonized with one another. You are good!