|Reviews for Prophecy of Four Royals With One Mistake|
| Neet chapter 28 . 5/19/2009
"That's evil!" wins the award for the most obvious statement so far.
Lyli sounds like she could be Queen material. Moreso than Tima, sorry, Alliana anyway. I can't help wondering, as this is a parody and your Heirs are obviously not suited to rule their kingdoms, are they going to end up on the throne at the end of the tale after all?
| Neet chapter 26 . 5/19/2009
I suggest Ternora leave Warcourage to the piranhas. Then she and Viridian (who are currently competing for my favourite character) can complete the quest by themselves, probably a lot easier than with the pesky Heir tagging along.
Her motives for questing are my favourite as well, though I love the way Destiny bullies Kymenos. Olumer and Elary seem more willing to go along with their Heirs just because.
I've been reading your rants for a couple of months now and finally decided to read some of your fiction. This has provided me with no end of amusement, along with some teeth-grinding moments when the Heirs get started, which shows you've done your job properly. No major criticisms unless I take hours to try and think of some, which I don't want to do when I'm enjoying reading too much.
| LadyWhen chapter 63 . 10/19/2007
I really, really loved this story. I've been reading your rants for a while but I didn't realize you had an account on fp. I was quite happy when I found out. I think reading good writing makes me better at it (I don't use this account much except for reviewing but I do write a lot).
Kymenos was an awesome character. So were Nightstone and Shadow and...what am I kidding myself, they were all amazing (the heirs were mostly brats, but hey, it was amusing to see them get into trouble because of their dumb mistakes) and I am definitely reading more of your stories. _ My glee can not be fully expressed in words; I just sound like I'm babbling.
| Poppy Pyres chapter 62 . 4/27/2005
oh, i also love how you dont just have dark vs light, good vs evilthis is so much better because it isnt clichedyoudont have good or bad, andilikethe way that a lot of your characters are ambiguous- not just good or evil, but human
| Poppy Pyres chapter 63 . 4/27/2005
I have now finished the first book,andImust say that i am definitely ! this story moved laong very fast, and the only quibble i have is that the changing viewpoints did get a bit confusing at times because there were five completely different characters, but you did this storyerywell, and i am glad rior cameback into the story
| Poppy Pyres chapter 40 . 4/22/2005
i was thrilled to find out that this is part one of a FIVE PART COMPLETE SERIESYAY!very mature. excellent writing!
| Hikari-Kage chapter 28 . 4/15/2005
Damn! Lyli is awesome. XD Way better than her bitch of a sister, anyway.
I love this story so much.
| SweetHeartJamie chapter 3 . 3/26/2004
| SweetHeartJamie chapter 2 . 3/26/2004
how horrible! what an evil vile women
| SweetHeartJamie chapter 1 . 3/26/2004
hmm interesting so far. I must continue to read before I gain an actual opinion
| monkeydude chapter 2 . 12/26/2003
Great story! All of the characters so far are so annoying, I love it!
| Sable Riddle chapter 4 . 12/18/2003
This is really cool. I love this story so far. One thing though; is Dark supposed to be the antagonist in this story? I just have this thing about getting offended whenever someone thinks Dark is evil. But your story is fine, it doesn't really make Dark seem that evil. I'm sorry; I don't have enough time to read the whole story today. At this rate, it'll take me a couple of days. But I love this so far.
| Sidereal chapter 63 . 11/9/2003
I loved it! Fantasy is fun. So is parodying it. I love the style and the way the characters develop. Nice twist at the end.
I'm glad that there's more in the series, too! *yay*
| Broken Part of Me chapter 15 . 10/25/2003
Y'know, there's something very familiar about this story... the impression that the characters are taking it much more seriously than the author. _ Makes me think of the Enchanted Forest Chronicles. Mind you, this is a marvellously good thing (means you're having fun!), and the only point of similarity that I've actually noticed, anyway.
I came over to yesterday to search for inspiration (such as plot nuggets in need of saving) for a NaNoWriMo novel. Instead, I discovered this little gem of a story. So far, I've seen nothing to criticise. :D Muchly enjoyable. I look forward to continuing on the story as soon as I have time.
| PC chapter 62 . 10/15/2003
great story funny, suspenseful, and lots of action and twists can't wait to read the next one