|Reviews for Spontaneity|
| HelliosDear chapter 24 . 2/11
Contınue pls! T-T
| HelliosDear chapter 1 . 2/7
damar means vein in my language! And i like your story
| Guest chapter 24 . 1/21
Please, PLEASE don't stop writing this story: it's beautifully written and one of the funniest things I've ever read: I hope to one day see it published on Amazon or paperback. I truly love this story and can't wait to see how it turns out!
KEEP ON WRITING, this story's amazing!
| mkren2 chapter 24 . 10/17/2013
love it again
| Guest chapter 24 . 8/12/2013
"A sound made him stop. It was really a very quiet sound, like several sharp catches of breath, but it still made him stop and turn wide eyed to stare at the door it had come from. It sounded like ….
The sound came again.
It sounded like someone was crying."
Redundancy! Redundancy everywhere! My god,why
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2013
Why is there even a manga section? Mangas are supposedly visual novels.
| Guest chapter 7 . 6/21/2013
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| coffincoffee1 chapter 1 . 6/9/2013
Please continue I love this story! It has so much character and the people are so awesome! I can't wait until Royce finds out Edan(a) Is a boy! The anticipation is killing me! I know you haven't updated since 2007 and this may be a lost cry for hope that this story is going to continue, but please go through with it!
| SmileyfaceGurl chapter 24 . 5/14/2013
Why there no moe?!
It's a crime against nature!
| mkren chapter 24 . 5/10/2013
love it please more
| SpriteBlue chapter 1 . 4/7/2013
Well you were right. Cliches, cliches everywhere!
| T.T chapter 24 . 1/25/2013
you are kidding me, this is amazing! You have to write more!
| Carolinel3 chapter 4 . 1/25/2013
This guys a paramaniac... I LOVE HIM!
| Purplebanana chapter 8 . 1/2/2013
So, this chapter definitely made me imagine Edan rounding up all the children in the castle and "teaching" them about the evilness of chickens, corrupting their innocent and gullible minds.
| Iceleaf chapter 24 . 11/22/2012
... Where's the rest of it?