|Reviews for Spontaneity|
| sapphire21 chapter 24 . 3/7/2012
so this is a really good story and i was wondering if there was a particular reason that it has been so long since you updated. i really love this story and would greatly appreciate finding out how it ends. or at least some acknowledge meant that you have given up on the story or whatever reason it may be that you have stopped updating.
| frolic-horror chapter 24 . 2/18/2012
This story is very addicting :) Despite having my reservations (Edan is a bit too crazy and seems not to care that his family and kingdom are in terrible danger) I couldn't stop reading it :)
| ValenceDeatrick chapter 24 . 2/13/2012
Ah, I really hope you continue this. I really like it... But I know it's unlikely. XD I can hope and dream though. It is really funny. o Well, I love it, so if you just so happen to have the urge to write, you should look at it. XD
| onkeyninja chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
I think you’ve decided to discontinue this awsum fic :( anw, plz update -eventho it’s highly unlikely- we reviewers are dying for more 3
| Krowhop chapter 24 . 10/7/2011
I realize it has been a few years since you have updated this story... but... I really really really want more. Please? Pretty please? I'll be your new best friend, I promise...
| Werekid chapter 24 . 9/27/2011
OMG. BEST. STORY. EVER. I would like to see more of Apallo and Edan. I think Damar should meet Cyrus and I think that would be AMAWZIN YAWL!
| Whatsoever chapter 1 . 9/26/2011
If you don't update this, I will die!
Atleast give your poor reviewers some hope :3
| Oshini chapter 24 . 8/27/2011
OHMYGOD, this story is AMAZING! I absolutely LOVE Edan. He's so hilarious! This story is non-stop humorous, and I couldn't stop laughing. Are you going to continue it anytime soon, or is it on hiatus? I can't wait to read more!
| foreverandeverr chapter 1 . 8/18/2011
Wow, this is really good.
i wish you would update though. You have'nt updated since 2007.
please update your story!
| alien2love chapter 24 . 5/23/2011
OMG. OMG. OMG. OMG. YOU HAVE TO, HAVE TO, HAVE TO UPDATE THIS!
an amazing story! :D i am in love33 I CAN'T WAIT TILL ROYCE FINDS OUT THAT "EDANA" IS ACTUALLY "EDAN"! :DDD
lols i love Cyrus:DD & the monkey hahaha i'm not a huge fan of Artemis, but I like Apollo
anyways, super awesome story! i loveeee it :DD
so, continue soon :D
please & thanks 3
| ewdeadaccounthere chapter 24 . 4/16/2011
ahaha,i love this story,cyrus is funny and edan is epic, i especially likes the last few lines xD
thanks for writing this story,its awesome.
| Breezers chapter 1 . 4/5/2011
I've only read the first chapter and I think I'm totally in love with Edan. He reminds me of a hissing kitten that thinks it's a roaring lion. I love it!
| Krowhop chapter 18 . 3/24/2011
In the last few days I have found myself eating chickens more than once. I was so bothered by this that I was compelled to tell my room mate about Edan's chicken theory. And he brought up a GREAT question.
"What about eggs? I mean, it is a chicken product, and therefore their 'flesh'...but in the featus form, so they have no mind yet, but is the mind control now a part of their genetic makeup?
And what if it isn't the chickens, but really the EGGS? I mean, they did come first, right? Or did the chicken? And the egg is it's ultimate solution to mind control?"
Mind you, this was a conversation in a public resturant. Only now do I wonder if I like your story so much because it reminds me of him...
| Krowhop chapter 24 . 3/24/2011
OMG NO! You haven't abandoned this story, have you? :( Just when it was getting a little more developed in the main plot, too! I hope you decide to pick it back up. It is fun, and fluff, and amusing. It seems like one that was fun to write, and I know it is fun to read! Please pick it back up? PLEASE? I'll share free anime with you!
| Krowhop chapter 4 . 3/24/2011
I am loving this story so far. Humor and fluff, and even semi-predictable storyline and all. It is a fun, easy read. Loving it!